18 Tour Baochanshanji

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and several companions travel through the mountains praise Zen, and to germinal discussion, that to achieve the lofty ideal of a career, we must have certain material conditions, but also need to have strong ambitions and perseverance, and proposed scholarship must be taken to is the narrative part. can be divided into two layers.
the first layer (first paragraph), introduced Zen Mountain Overview praise.
closely the article title to The tour highlighted the place of the point out the Temple. written the monastery, and both confirmed that praise the name of the origin of Zen Mountain, but also leads to write Chinese cave at the beginning of a name and the reason they take care of. Hutchison servant monument text, follow the name responsible for reality, and distinguish the Huashan .
the second layer (second paragraph), the cave of Travel Through China.
outlined before the first hole after hole, and an overview, highlighting the hole before the hole and after the very different environmental characteristics, and the tour before the hole After the tour is easy and the difficulty of hole reveals the general visitors to the mental asylum and easy, as later, elapsed. relations, and later provide the basis for management by King Yu. As the deep hole, , but drop-outs out. travelers'Cave to this end. of another Buxu two points. First, and not very along with her husband travel is fun. enough into the fire is still sufficient to clear,cheap UGG boots, .
second part (third, four), writing travel mountain experience. This is the article's discussion section, can be divided into two layers.
the first layer (third paragraph), written Huashan Yu-dong experiences. This layer is the focus of the full text.
to to turn into arguments. of the ancients first by care, visit the ancient view that is not random, but in the ancient ambitious goals set out, far from the road and risk, , a spring side out, and remember those who travel very public deep, then the poor can not swim too good. realm of insufficient, nor to have ; records, , complete and thorough. three , of which to have regret, no regrets men, and its Practice makes ridicule of peace? ; do Wuzhi also failed to against the two meanings, take care of put forward the Income is also in it. must be taken to ;, resulting in future generations repeated the baseless assertion. kinds of situations, that ; wrong its mass and monensin name origin, name and for the record time, and of the place of origin, signed. This is the format commonly used in travel writing.
two writing features
1. due to my reasoning, meeting with Syria's Travels
this different from the general, the description is not heavy mountain scenery, and focuses on reasoning because the incident in order for the purpose of reasoning, but reasoning of Travel content of the materials and evidence. the article to the content of Travel Yu, germinal discussion, because the incident reasoning to Seeing , accurate and fully describes a philosophy of life, giving the ideological inspiration and make the perfect manifestation of a profound ideological content and harmony.
article in front of Travel Mountain, behind the talk about truth, combined with narrative and discussions have close and natural, and before and after the echo, structured, worded carefully. text of the recorded tour content is discussing the foundation of discussion of the facts; talk is of Travel content in the ideological understanding of the rational generalization and deepening. in front of Travel everywhere from behind the arguments put pen to paper, to pave the way for the debate; followed closely the discussions and everywhere in front of Travel, travel in mind given the contents of a particular ideological significance. narratives and arguments complement each other, are complementary and reinforce each other.
2. focus outstanding levels of detail is properly the subject of this article describes
to slightly and both have been carefully ruled closely these two points. Part of Travel view seems to paint a portrait of bland, actually thoughtful, deliberate arrangements. first introduced Zen Mountain Overview praise omitted; second paragraph of the note After the cave tour from the Long Hua. The former servant of the monument and remember details of the text, the rest are omitted; which in turn recorded before and after hole hole profiles are omitted, after the hole of Travel through quite detailed. recorded before and after hole hole profiles, and the former a little hole, after hole set; mind after the cave tour, and write through strategy, Buxu through, write feelings of Monument to express emotion servant omitted. Yee Chinese cave tour experience, and discussion > Travel Notes section of this article, except for the reasoning, there is no extra text; discussion part of the reasoning fully and restraint, no useless words. The complete language of strict, extremely simplify use of ink, concise language properly, so that Change is difficult to add or delete text. text in some sentences, such as is plain and profound, simple words of the Italian abundance of aphorisms.